User:Vyyshen/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
https://w.wiki/7eLw

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose it because ornamentation in architecture, textiles, and manuscripts plays a large role in Islamic art.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

The lead section introduces the definition and confine of 'ornament,' although I recommend listing examples and outlining the article.

The article is dense and at times hard to follow with its wide coverage. It would be wise to use a chronological, thematic, or material for organization.

Furthermore, a section of the article disrupts the worldwide viewpoint and focuses instead on Roman ornament.

The images are mostly Western (Roman, Rococo, Baroque, and Renaissance).

There are comments on the lack of depth in the article and some biases/personal comments.

I do not like the non-accessible nature of this article. It feels robust in its global coverage yet it is not organized by culture. To improve, I would outline the article better in the first section and start with a chronological overview of ornamentation in multiple cultures and then make connections.

I like the inclusion of modern ornamentation.