User:Vyyyvu/Drag panic/AzeiahMacapagal Peer Review

General info
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Vyyyvu/Drag panic
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Drag panic

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The lead could've been brought up better with providing insight for what Austraila offers. Moreover, does not really descirbe what the content is.

Content

The content is relevant to the topic and is up to date with all of the dates being presented. Content is neutral and not overrpresented.

Sources and References

Sources are up to date and relate to the topics of the article. The links also work and are thorough.

Organization

Content is organized by separating different points in the article. Could've added more to each point by establishing the more information about these events.

Image and Media

Does not have media to offer.

Overall Impressions

Overall, the article had some good major points that needs more information behind it. Introducing the topic of Austrialia is also something that needs to be worked on. Providing context to these points could also help out in understanding the overall point of Drag Panic.