User:Vzhan/Feminism in China/Siyu Han Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Vanessa Zhan


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Feminism in China


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Feminism in China

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like your article very much. I learned from your article that the discussion of feminism is a topic that can easily make netizens all over the world go to extremes. Perhaps it was able to maintain a calm narrative initially, but as the case deepened, it was often a war without gunpowder. However, feminism in China is different from that in foreign countries, although Chinese women's rights have been greatly improved since the day the People's Republic of China was founded. However, the awareness and prevalence of feminist rights began in recent years. But I think your wiki citation is too cumbersome. Some of the content is difficult for me to find, and some links cannot be opened, so I suggest that your citation part can be streamlined, and unnecessary or unimportant details can be deleted. I hope my suggestion is helpful to you, thanks.