User:Vzhan/Feminism in China/Viola Q Lin Peer Review

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 * User:Vzhan/Feminism in China


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 * Feminism in China

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I think first, you could try to add and expand your article with the "Impact (that the Feminist Five had)" and the other "Feminist Events" that happened afterwards the Feminist Five, online feminist events are also part of reality and are definitely worth adding! I noticed some of your contents have been cover already in the existing article. For example, "On March 9 2018, there was a surge of popularity of a article posted on WeChat on the topic of feminism, but was later taken down and banned the accounts of another feminist group called Feminist Voice with the reason of it being “criminal prostitution groups” and “outside reactionary forces." can be find on 2.3: 21st century under 2: History in the catalog. I think you can absolutely try to create a new heading to write and make it more detailed about this event, if you want. And what you write, "but social media apps like WeChat and Weibo kept the movement alive", I think it is not quite fit under this heading, "Aftermath". As what I mention above, I think it will be a good idea to create a new heading to chat about feminist events on the web.

As far as I know, there have been many (offline or online) feminist movements in China in recent years, too. You can check some links that I searched:

https://i-d.vice.com/en_uk/article/wj53kx/li-tingting-on-life-as-a-radical-lesbian-feminist-activist-in-china

https://www.buzzfeednews.com/article/nishitajha/zheng-churan-feminist-five-china-running

https://www.bbc.com/news/world-asia-china-38325121

And the comments you mention about the event are excellent and the sources cited are authoritative. And it's good that you mentioned the experiences of the five person after the Feminist Five. But I think it would have been better if all five of them had been mentioned and their latest news. Anyway, I think there is a lot can be written about in your article, and I am looking forward to seeing you extend your article as well as the bibliography!