User:W1i2k3i4p5e6d/Mercapturic acid/Cloudy417 Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
I think these contributions are very interesting to consider, and they definitely provide new information that had not been previously published on this Wikipedia article. These additions are very detailed, and dissect every aspect of the term "mercapturic acid." This makes me question the etymology of my own edited article: Glycosyl. These edits are very helpful to people who are curious about the background of words, and want one article to discuss both the etymology and function. However, I wonder if this section could be more concise. While it is very detailed, I don't think all the detail is necessary to mention. Perhaps the background on "mercapturic" would have sufficed. I also think another source would have allowed this article to fulfill the notability requirements. A clickable link to the available website also would have been helpful. In any case, this addition was very informative and had a neutral tone.