User:WA Stokins/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
The one on the great Nintendo data leak of 2018. May Iwata have mercy on us.

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose it, because, well.....I love it! It's one of my favorite topics to discuss and/or dig through! I'm no data-miner, at least not yet, but I've lost dozens of hours to The Cutting Room Floor trawling through pages about the data leak. From the Pokemon Gen 2 1997 SpaceWorld demos to Super Donkey.

The article does seem pretty good, at least at first scroll.

Evaluate the article
Honestly, perhaps this is simply because I'm not very good at evaluating pages yet - but the article did seem fairly nice to me. It's very informational, with a good neutral tone and hefty length. But it's not perfect - a lot of the information does seem pretty clustered together, with an opening that's far too long.

But the one primary question it left me with - who was the person behind these leaks? Furthermore, how did he get access to these servers anyway?

In the article's commentary section, there was a mention that it may be due to Nintendo's Chinese subsidiary, iQue, and looking through the talkpage there were mentions of the name "Zammis Clark", but both of these are incidental and not very clearly discussed.

The citations, as well, were seemingly good.