User:WIKI20220/Unborn Victims of Violence Act/Gzora1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:WIKI20220 WIKI20220


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:WIKI20220/Unborn Victims of Violence Act


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Unborn Victims of Violence Act

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead provides a strong opening that explains briefly what the bill is. The lead is similar to a summary of what the whole bill is about and breaks down what will be discussed throughout the Wiki page, while giving it a very non-biased and fair explanation. The content seems up to date as it includes any votes and hearings that took place in the lead up to the passing of the bill. The content included is very neutral, but I feel that it mentions abortion more than I expected the article to, as the bill was not created in response to abortion, but due to the nature of what the bill describes, it makes sense that abortion would inevitably become a taking point related to the bill. There are no sources included yet to judge, but the provisions are taken from the US Code, and this is a good source to use in a Wikipedia article. I think the article is organized well, but the section that says "article draft" and the second section that says "article lead" should be removed. There are no pictures included yet, but I think a good one would be an image of the President signing this bill into law. Overall, the article was updated nicely, as the paragraph in the "legislative history" section was a nice inclusion that gave the bill more background and understanding to the reader.