User:WISE Physics/Superconducting quantum computing/Lwingerter Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

WISE Physics, Mauryan11


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:WISE%20Physics/Superconducting_quantum_computing?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Superconducting quantum computing

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Well written article, full of information, extensively researched, sourced, and written
 * Understandably complex given it is related to quantum computing, but it could be beneficial to simplify the language if possible, understandable if not
 * presentation was the same way, though it can be hard to present in a simple way that which is in no way simple