User:WKJacob/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
IBM PCjr

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I have chosen this page because I strongly believe that knowledge of previous tech can be integral in figuring out how to improve current tech, but the article itself is so clearly unfinished.

Evaluate the article
The introduction is nice and concise, and includes a brief description of the major points in the article. It also does not include information not expanded upon in the article. The lead is not too long, it includes just the right amount of information.

The article does not include any discussion of something that would apply to the Equity Gap.