User:WRICE00/Ocean acidification in the Arctic Ocean/Schw1890 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

WRICE00, Yarbr056


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:WRICE00/Ocean acidification in the Arctic Ocean


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ocean acidification in the Arctic Ocean

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like the lead, it is concise but easy to understand. I think you have a good preliminary set up to how you are going to tackle things, but definitely not enough edits for this stage as well as the number of sources. Did you end up posting your edits elsewhere, as I cannot find them on the original article either? Good luck finishing, it is an interesting topic and I like that mollusc source you have cited!