User:WRICE00/Ocean acidification in the Arctic Ocean/Weile112 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

WRICE00, Yarbr056


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Ocean acidification in the Arctic Ocean


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ocean acidification in the Arctic Ocean

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really like this article. It has very detailed information that is very on topic and relevant. It is concise and informative, while using language appropriate for the general public. It is neutral content and does not create bias.

The article covers a wide range of information regarding the topic while not swaying too far. I feel like there could be more subheadings to break up the paragraphs, but that is more of a specific tweak that isn't absolutely necessary. There is a good amount of sources. There could be more but what is there now is fine. Assuming I am comparing the correct pages, the wiki article has definitely improved tremendously. There is much more organization and clarity. The images are a wonderful addition.