User:WThiels/The Great North Road/GrantDReid Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(WThiels)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:WThiels/The Great North Road


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think this page is off to a good start, as it informs about the topic that you chose a provides a enough information as to why its important. I think your last paragraph is written in a more academic essay format as you seem to be making a claim of the potential purpose of the road could be, other than that I thought the article is looking well, I think it could use a bit more specifics on where the road is located. I see you still plan on adding in stuff based on the headers and reminders you left in. I also don't see any sources so I can't comment on those besides the article needs sources.