User:WUSTLWikiWarrior/Giuseppe Musolino/Madisonokon Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead Peer Review
- I don't really know the procedure for writing an article on an outcast that already has an existing article, but I would suggest writing an original draft for the lead.

- Other than that I think the information in the lead gave a good overview. You could maybe add in a sentence about Musolino's legacy.

Initial Crimes and First Trial Peer Review
- I got a little confused in the sentence about Musolino being stabbed, it might be helpful if you switch up the structure of this specific sentence.

- The wording about the trial potentially being corrupt may be taking a little bit of an argumentative position. Maybe list the events that actually happened (like lawyers not being able to call witnesses, etc.) and then explain how that led some people to conclude that Musolino's conviction was corrupt.

- If the sources you had for the potentially corrupt trial were arguing that the trial was in fact corrupt, state how that information could be biased.

- You did a really good job with the citations here and I like how some of the words in this section linked to other Wikipedia pages.

Escape from Prison Peer Review
- I really liked this section! It was very entertaining and engaging while still maintaining a neutral stance and staying informative

Second Trial and Imprisonment Peer Review
- This section was excellent in working with the limited information we have available. You seemed to have found a lot of great sources and incorporated them very well to tell a cohesive story.

Musolino as legend Peer Review
- I think this section is really important, especially because of our discussions about othering and different archetypes throughout history. Again, I don't know how writing a preexisting Wikipedia article exactly works, but adding in some of your original work here might be a good idea.