User:WVeitch/Norma Merrick Sklarek/Jgourl Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:WVeitch/Norma_Merrick_Sklarek?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Norma Merrick Sklarek

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Neutral viewpoint, some sentence formatting could be simplified.
 * No hyperlinks
 * Changes for constant formatting (Significant buildings to Notable Works)
 * Good updates for current information (i.e. awards section)
 * Appropriate use of citations
 * Early Life & Education describes her addending high school as a "magnet school", which is a concept that was introduced in the 1970's
 * no irelevant information