User:WVeitch/Norma Merrick Sklarek/Julianneteres Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

WVeitch


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:WVeitch/Norma_Merrick_Sklarek?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:WVeitch/Norma_Merrick_Sklarek?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:WVeitch/Norma_Merrick_Sklarek?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
I appreciate the massive. amount of research that went into this. My only complaint it that it is a huge block of text and I would divide it into early life and career etc. I like the list of accomplishments, notable works and references. I also think that you should made the headings in different fonts but besides that I think its strong.