User:Wadlet/Skin-walker/Dr.pepperlvr Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Wadlet


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Wadlet/Skin-walker


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Wadlet/Skin-walker

Evaluate the drafted changes
The top of your article is a little strange, It seems like you copied it from an already existing article on wikipedia? just gave me that vibe from the first sentence. you have two table of contents which im sure wasn't on purpose. You have a lot of good information and you have good sentence structure throughout many of your paragraphs. I do think that there were a few stumbled over but not too bad at all. You added a lot of links which was good on your part it helps readers understand what you are writing about and they are definitley important.Where is your bibliography I don't see one? I only see a noted and jump to section I don't know if that just my computer or if it was just left out and if so where are the three sources you got for your article and how did you use them. I know that there are pictures of skinwalkers out there however im sure that they weren't available for you to use. Overall i think you did a great job on your article.