User:Wafflecone14/Brauron/Dinnerghost Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Wafflecone14


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Wafflecone14/Brauron


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Brauron

Lead Section
* While you have not yet edited the lead, these are my thoughts on what is on the page currently.

The first paragraph is very concise and explains to me why this article is important.

The rest of the lead which talks about the sanctuary of Artemis at Brauron quit a bit. does the lead need to go into such detail about the sanctuary of Artemis at Brauron? The sanctuary possibly could have its own or be added to another section farther down.

This article is supposed to be about the city of Brauron right? not the sanctuary of Artemis at Brauron? (this is confusing to me) and While the lead should mention the sanctuary as it seems to be important to the city it could possibly be more brief.

That being said could it be possible to add more concise information about just the city of Brauron? if possible would be good.

Clarity of Article Structure
The section on Mythology and History is a bit confusing to me as it jumps straight into the mythology and gives no context as to how that has anything to do with Brauron in the beginning. You might also want to separate the two, Mythology and History and give them each their own section to possibly help with clarity.

The sections, Archaeology of the sanctuary and Cult of Artemis Brauronia seem pretty good as it is clear to me what they discussing and would be good to put after a section about sanctuary of Artemis at Brauron.

The section, Vvavrona is good as well as it seems to talk about the city itself.

Content Neutrality
The content of your article seems to be pretty neutral with the exception of the sentence "apparently nothing impressive to see" which you've already seem to have caught.

Coverage Balance
the section on the sanctuary of Artemis at Brauron seems to be the biggest part of this article are there any other perspectives to this city?