User:Wafflehouse777/American Civics Test/Gobears18 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Wafflehouse777


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wafflehouse777/American_Civics_Test?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * American Civics Test

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The author does a good job of expanding on the American Civics Test article and explaining concepts in detail. The content produced is up to date and speaks of the latest controversy surrounding the American Civics Test. The tone of the article is neutral and states what others believe on the topic without inputting their own beliefs. The content is well written and varies in sentence length making the article intriguing to the reader. The only suggestion I can make is that the author varies his sources as five sources come from the same website.