User:Walti13/Brooklyn Marathon/Tagawlik Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Walti13


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Walti13/Brooklyn_Marathon?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article lead is good with multiple sources but it could be longer and have a more detailed look into what the article body will discuss. As the rest of the article is written consider the importance of giving the reader as much information as you can on the topic. Sources are very credible and recent as many compliment each other with information creating an honesty and trust with the reader. Overall the article has little to review as it contains little content but I believe this article has the capability of being great and very informative for those looking to learn.