User:WanjiaRuan/sandbox/P1HarmonyEvaluation

Article Info

 * Article Website: P1Harmony
 * Why you have chose this article to evaluate: Since I am a K-pop fan, I have a deeper understanding of this culture. In my previous experience with Wikipedia for learning about groups I just noticed that it was one of the easiest and most reliable ways for me to gain a deeper understanding of the group. I would love to see more people learn about P1Harmony through Wikipedia and then get involved with it once they learn about it.

Lead

 * This topic's lead section provides only very basic information regarding the group. While it did a good job in the first sentence, it failed to provide an introduction to the major sections in the text below. The lead is too concise. It is necessary to provide more information.

Content

 * This 'P1Harmony' group Wikipedia article contains essential information about the group, including awards and nominations, as well as a basic description of the group's structure and history.
 * However, it fails to provide the audience with the most up-to-date information about their upcoming concert, as well as some more detailed but crucial information for a complete understanding of the group.
 * Still, the article right now only contains facts, more accurately described viewpoints could be provided from both side could be beneficial.

Tone and Balance

 * The article is correct in the neutral sense that it presents facts in relation to the group. Based on the current content, there is less likelihood of substantial differences in interpretation occurring.

Sources and References

 * This article makes extensive use of sources and references. According to WikiProject Korea/Reliable sources, some of the sources are reliable, including Osen and Star News. The following websites are considered to be unreliable: Soompi and some undefined websites. A more reliable source could be found to replace the original one or some parts of it could be removed.

Organization and writing quality

 * It is clear that the article is organized, but some important sections may be missing
 * As the article is concise, it may sometimes be difficult to read due to the use of synonyms too frequently.

Images and Media

 * There is only one image / media embedded on this page. It is insufficient for a boy group performing a visual performance. As there is no identification below the photo, it is also difficult to identify each member.

Talk page discussion

 * The talk page simply contains 'nothing' other than edit history (except deletion requirement). No conversations are going on the behind the scenes about represent the topic.
 * It is a part of WikiPorject of Pop music and Korea.

Overall Impression
My overall impression of this article is that it is basic but not sufficient. I found the information on the page to be well-written, the layout of the page to be clear and organized, and the citations to be somewhat credible. However, this article still requires significant improvement: the majority focused on adding more information, developing additional perspectives (sections) for completeness, and adding more media and images.