User:WarmNoodle/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Attack on Titan (season 4)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
This is an animated show that I have been following since 2018; I'm deeply drawn into the themes presented in this show, I love the story writing, the soundtracks, and character development.

Evaluate the article
Lead section: Incoherent lead section. Lead section dives into the plot synopsis without a section header for it. Relationship with manga needs to be elaborated. Scriptwriting, score, direction should have coherent descriptions in their own section, not in the lead. Information about directors in the lead does not agree with the information about directors in the episode list.Content: Content is upto date for the most part, but the Japanese airing dates for some of the episodes seem completely wrong. Content seems incoherently spread out in the lead section. Heavy emphasis on the episode list with synopses for each episode. Very little information about cast and staff.

Tone: Seems neutral.

Sources: Some sources are shallow news articles some are facebook posts, but there are official websites of the attack on titan staff although these are not thoroughly explored/presented in the article.Organization: The article clearly needs subheadings for cast, writing, direction, staff and needs a rework for the lead to make it more coherent.

Media: This article has only one image which seems to have been copy-pasted here, so it may not adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations.

Talk page: There's a conversation about the composers and directors for the music but no conversation about any of the issues I have mentioned above.

Overall: The article has a lot of content in the episodes list section which seems fine so far but it needs a rework for its lead section. It has strong plot synopses for each episode and it is very descriptive and well ordered. The cover information could be expanded upon greatly by referring to the manga, production and publishing companies. It is well-developed if one is interested only in the episode-by-episode synopses, but not great for someone who wants a holistic picture about the particular season of the anime.