User:Watson521/Lucius Barker/ResearchMethods88 Peer Review

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Very well-written section! It was detailed and informational, but concise and clear. The quotes you added were very relevant to the content and showed how important and well-received his books were to the Political Science world.

I recommended adding a link to the phrase "hymie" since I wasn't sure what it was and so other readers may not know either.

I would add a space between the word and the parenthesis in "Black Americans and the Political System(published in la"

After looking at the original article, I would consider adding a picture of Lucius Barker! If you want you can also add a "Civil Rights" section. The wiki article for my guy, Chuck Stone, has one, and I feel like it could be applicable here too if you want more stuff to add.

Your links and references were good!