User:Wcubias/Consumer Reports/Alex Winetrout Peer Review

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The lead has updated to reflect the new content added, and the content added directly relates to the lead titled, "Founding & Early Years". The lead is concise and gives a great first sentence that explains what the rest of the paragraph will be about, the consumer movement. This applies directly to the main article "consumer reports", as this gives historical context about the overall article. The content added is neutral and unbiased as only facts were added, there was no opinions given, which helped the articles pace. There was one reference added that was a reliable source but the link didn't work, so I had to type the source in manually. On the bibliography there are 4 additional references so I would recommend adding or using one of these sources into the draft. The source is current as it was released in 2011. The content added was very clear and easy to read for me, the pace didn't feel to fast or too slow. I would recommend adding a visual such as the book cover image for "Your Money's Worth" as this gives more context to the book you are referring to. I would also recommend adding information to "Other errors or issues" section of the original article, as in doing more research in the consumer reports would help contribute to more information as that section only has two examples. Overall, I believe the content added contributed to the quality of the article as the facts given helped me understand the historical context of how Consumer Reports (CR) was started. This directly relates to our course material as this has to due with consumers and their overall safety, which we have covered in class and have read in our readings.