User:Wd234323/Urban culture/CJS77 Peer Review

Good overview of how culture develops within urban settings. You give a detailed description of what the topic means to other parts of the world, beyond the United States, and you include plenty of links to other Wikipedia articles. For the last sentence of the introduction paragraph, y it sounds like you’re giving an opinion or trying to persuade the reader, so try to rewrite it in a way that sounds more general, rather than personal of persuasive.