User:Wd234323/Urban culture/Imanibr Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Wd234323


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Urban culture


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Urban culture

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think your contributions were very useful and thought out well. One thing, I would avoid having long paragraphs without any citations or sources listed. I noticed this in the political and social trends section mainly. Other than that it is very good!