User:Weilh/Draft:Land Change Science/Siperez Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Weilh


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Draft:Land Change Science


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * The tone of the text is balanced and neutral. The text is supported by reputable sources, and several informative examples are provided. The text is well-written and it was interesting to read!
 * The one remote sensing image is an informative example as well as eye catching. You could consider adding a few more images throughout the text to illustrate your points.
 * In the Human Impact and Land Change Science subsection it states that a few examples will be discussed, but currently there is only one. I’m assuming you haven’t gotten to additional examples yet, but if you think the deforestation example is sufficient, make change that text accordingly.
 * Wikipedia’s stance on (sub-)headings/titles is only the first word and proper nouns are capitalized. Make sure all your titles are consistent with this.
 * The material covered in The Origin and Influences sections are both related to the discipline’s history and influences. Since these sections are both on the shorter side, you could consider merging them.
 * A more descriptive title to the first Overview section may be useful for readers who are quickly skimming the article – maybe something like “Overview of land change”.