User:Weiliu777/Summer Palace (2006 film)/Jacobjia66 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Weiliu777)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Weiliu777/Summer_Palace_%282006_film%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Summer Palace (2006 film)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think draft needs to describe in detail about the plot and main ideas of the movie in the Lead section. In addition, the draft needs to describe as much as possible what the original essay does not explain, such as the background of the film's creation. Students need to understand carefully the content requirements of the Lead section in the course. This draft still has a lot of room for improvement. The content part of darft needs to be described in more detail. I think the students listed a very good point of view of the movie, but it needs more description of the point of view. And draft needs to be arranged in a timeline. You can do it! Fighting!