User:Weiliu777/Summer Palace (2006 film)/Jarvanc Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Weiliu777


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Weiliu777/Summer Palace (2006 film)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Weiliu777/Summer Palace (2006 film)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The article is missing the lead section

Content

The added content is closely related to the topic and is up-to-date. It does not include content that does not belong. All content is closely related to the topic. The article focuses on the director's presentation in the film Summer Palace and discusses issues about gender and female self-identity, but the article is too small and more content needs to be added to support the argument.

Tone and balance

The added content is neutral. All claims are very objective and are not influenced by the author's own bias or subjective understanding. The content does not attempt to persuade readers to support certain positions, but simply tells them objectively about the plot and meaning of the film. There is no under-representation or over-representation of views.

Sources and References

The sources are reliable and references are from the book Journal of Cinema and Media Studies, published by Michigan in 2021, and the arguments and analysis in the material are valid for the film. However, additional academic references can be found and added to further support these.

Organization

The content added is concise, clear, and easy to read. There are no grammatical or spelling errors. However, there are gaps in the structure of the article and more content is needed.

Graphics and Media

The manuscript does not include images that would enhance understanding of the topic.