User:Weiliu777/Summer Palace (2006 film)/Wenqi Zhang Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Weiliu777/Summer Palace (2006 film)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Weiliu777/Summer_Palace_%282006_film%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Guiding questions

The lead part is omitted and there is no introductory part for the film brief and background information.

Content

The content added is relevant to the topic and up-to-date. The content is divided into several bulletin points; the sections are well divided however these several parts lack specific detail support. Thus, these sections need to be filled with more content and concrete details.

Tone and balance

The content added are objective details and analysis and the content is neutral and some of the viewpoints about sex and youth culture need to be further fulfilled. The article is trying to convince the readers to appreciate the film in favor of gaining a deeper understanding of the sex power and the relations between sex and youth. The sources for this article are well chosen and these sources are related to the film. The article is supported by credible journal article and there is only one source and more articles can be found to support the idea.

Organization:

Since it lacks more content as the major content, the organization cannot be predicted.

Images and media:

There are no images to support the content and it may lack vivid description and images for the content.

Overall impressions:

This is a draft version and it still lacks more details and clear structure to support the topic.