User:Weloveflowers/Catharine Beecher/KermitTheFrog13 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Weloveflowers


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Weloveflowers/Catharine_Beecher?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Catharine Beecher

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article looks fantastic and I'm so glad you guys chose to focus on Catharine Beecher! There is so much valuable information in this article and it covers so much of Catharine's life. The information I can see is very on-topic to both the class and your topic for the Wiki project and all info seems very neutral. It seems like all information is backed up by valid sources and all of the links/sources work.

I think it would be interesting to continue to elaborate on how she pioneered female education in the US as well as provide more details on her legacy and impact. It could also be really interesting to elaborate on some of the books Catharine wrote. The Wiki article lists so many of her works, it could be very informative to get a short synopsis or briefing on what she wrote in more detail. Overall, I think you guys are doing fantastic! I would make sure to add some more details as suggested above to differentiate your article from the already published one but otherwise, the article is looking great.