User:Wendy's four for four/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Andy Schor

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because Schor is the mayor of Lansing, and even though I do no live in Lansing I am right next door in East Lansing.

Evaluate the article
The Lead section of this article is very short and lacking information. As the mayor of the capital city of Michigan I think they could talk about more than just what political party he belongs to. Just like the introduction, the whole article is lacking information about Andy. How can you discuss his early life and education in just one sentence? The article only mentions that he is originally from New York and moved to attend the University of Michigan. The article should expand on where he went to high school and if he took an extra education after college, there has to be more to a mayor's Early life then just where he is originally from. The article does not include any images to enhance understanding of the topic, the only picture is of Andy's face but there is no caption attached to it. Overall I would say the article is underdeveloped, compared to other wikipedia article regarding mayors there is very little information in Andy Schor's article.