User:Wendychou.neu/Sex-positive feminism/Nancylii Peer Review

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Peer review: Upon reading the Sex-positive feminism article, I feel like this is a very comprehensive article, and the structure is very clear and easy to follow. One thing I noticed is that there is only one citation in the lead (the first paragraph), and all the other information written has no citation. If you could find where all those information came from and add them to the reference would align more with the wiki article criteria.

I also think the "debate" share similar goal with the "critique" section, maybe could combine them together?