User:Wentl015/Jacob Tobia/Conra278 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (Alicesonbegaye)
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Alicesonbegaye/sandbox

Lead evaluation
Lead is changed accurately recognize Tobia's pronouns.

Content evaluation
New content from 2018 and 2019 is added for up-to-date activities in Tobia's life.

Tone and balance evaluation
Tone is very neutral.

Organization evaluation
Organization is good. New content is added to appropriate sections within the article.

Overall evaluation
New content is up-to-date and any edits made only make the article more relevant. New content is good.