User:Werickson.31/Mahamat Déby/Marialobatograbowsky Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Werickson.31


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Werickson.31/Mahamat Déby


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mahamat Déby

Evaluate the drafted changes
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I really enjoyed how this article included the perspectives of many actors, describing the opinions of the French government, the FACT rebels, and protesters. Furthermore, you describe their opinions, while keeping a neutral stance and dedicating relatively equal article space to each perspective. One thing you could do to improve the section on French support is to make a connection to the colonial past, so that readers that are unaware of the history can be informed. It would also be interesting to include a section on the public's present support for Mahamat Déby and whether protests/resistance are still ongoing.

The sources cited are also mostly newspapers and media websites, which although reliable, a larger variety of sources and more academic journals/books would benefit the article.

A lead section that summarizes the additions you have made to the article would also be a good improvement for the article.