User:Wesleyatwork/The Buddhist Priest's Wife/Kameron.tomlin1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

@Wesleyatwork


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wesleyatwork/The_Buddhist_Priest%27s_Wife?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

After reading your draft there are a couple things I would like to discuss. Your lead was very well written, it includes a great introductory sentence that clearly describes the main idea of the your short story. Your lead isn't over detailed, you kept it short and simple. For your plot summary, you did an excellent job. I was able to understand the important details of the story. However, to make even better than it is I would add some attitudes on what others had of this story, how this story was seen to others, and how it affected others. It would add up your references as well. Overall, great job!