User:Wesleymuse/Boston Massacre/Acpalladino Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) <User: Wesleymuse on the Boston Massacre


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wesleymuse/Boston_Massacre?vocation=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Boston Massacre

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I like where you’re headed. The information was not distracting and it got to the point. My main thing is that I would focus on sentence structure and grammar. There were a few simple mistakes that, obviously, weren’t intentional so I’m not too worried about them. I would also make sure that you cite your sources and use transition phrases and words so that the reader(s) understand why this piece of information is important.Hope this helps! -Audrey Palladino