User:WessNature/Land restoration/SkateNate Peer Review

General info
Wesley Rogers
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:WessNature/Land restoration
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Land restoration

Evaluate the drafted changes
I believe you could go into more detail on ADRECS. It seems to end abruptly after the introduction of it. Additionally, the Repairing Damaged Land section could be made more robust and have more structure. You could provide a specific case of land reparation and the success of it. You could also include difficulties that come with land reparation.

Lead: The article is off to a good start, both explaining the topic of the article and differentiating it from land reclamation. The lead is well understood through my eyes, no issues.

I feel like there is a lot of room for improvement for this article specifically. Perhaps some information on restoration in biomes other than just the desert, like rewilding forests or the process of restoring coral reefs. Maybe these aren't the best suggestions but something else other that battling desertification would carry this article a long way. Also don't forget to look for 5 citations. Other than the mildness of the material, the tone and balance is neutral, the wording is easily understood, and organization seems like it works.