User:WhisenRosei/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Concentrated animal feeding operation

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I have chosen this article because it relates closely to the topic of my focus.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)


 * 1) I've noticed that this article does not cover the topic of the stakeholder's roles in CAFOS. At least the term stakeholders were never used.
 * 2) Going off of this, it touches on the government but it doesn't touch on the "smallholders", or the buyer and consumers.
 * 3) The article has a nice neutral tone throughout.
 * 4) There is also a lack of criticism towards CAFOS and certain key people's views on them. Nit-picking at CAFOS negative points.
 * 5) This could go into talking about what kind of rights an animal has, etc.