User:Whit873M/Lamb-Shaffer syndrome/JMILES19 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Whit873M)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Whit873M/Lamb-Shaffer syndrome


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lamb-Shaffer syndrome

Evaluate the drafted changes
i think that this article would be a bit harder because it is a rare disorder but I do think there is still more to be added. I think you would gain more information by finding peer reviewed articles on the topic. I think if you explicitly search this in a search bar you could find some articles as well. Also the school library website has a database for strict peer reviewed articles I think Dr. Rahn has more specific information on it but if you asked I am sure she would be happy to help. Once you get those sources it would add more to the bibliography also. I think you could add more to the initial background section because a lot of other information about this disorder is still unknown due to it being so rare.