User:Whiteguru/A Beautiful Crime

GA Review
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Reviewer: Whiteguru (talk · contribs) 03:21, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

'''Starts GA Review. The review will follow the same sections of the Article. ''' --Whiteguru (talk) 03:21, 6 September 2021 (UTC) 

Observations

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

HTML document size: 95 kB   Prose size (including all HTML code): 18 kB    References (including all HTML code): 34 kB    Wiki text: 24 kB    Prose size (text only): 11 kB (1785 words) "readable prose size" References (text only): 4207 B


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * Lede is a neat introduction.
 * Plot is short and sharp.
 * How an author portrays his characters: sympathetic yet with greed and immorality besieged by social inequality.
 * Background and publication history is good, references to Daisy Miller and Henry James suffice.
 * Background and publication history is good, references to Daisy Miller and Henry James suffice.


 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * This article suffers from over-linking.
 * I am not sure overtourism needs a link in the lead. Best left to the relevant section.
 * Pace refers to pace in narrative, this link is appropriate.
 * In the Plot section, we do not need links to Venice, nor New York City.
 * Palazzo has already been linked in the lead, see WP:OVERLINK as the guide.
 * My sense is that linking expatriate is overlinking. It is a common term.
 * Patricia Highsmith is linked in the lead; further links are not necessary.
 * Do we need a link to Peggy Gugghenhiem Collection? Is this necessary to appreciate its inclusion? Consider.
 * Everyone knows where Paris is, we do not need a link.
 * Links to Mestre and Linosa - are these necessary to grasping the narrative, the location? Consider.
 * We do not need a link to doorstop.
 * In Background and publication history we do not need a link to Ohio.
 * We do not need links to non-profit organisation, nor monastery.
 * Airbnb is a term in the public domain. Link is not necessary.
 * We don't need links to hardback, paperback nor audiobook.
 * Social class is a self-evident term, it does not need a link.
 * Patricia Highsmith has been linked in the lead. A second link is not needful.


 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * Overtourism is well referenced.
 * Reception is balanced: praise and criticism.


 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * Yes, NPOV is preserved in this article;


 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * Page created 5 September 2021
 * Page is stable


 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * Page has 6 images
 * File:A Beautiful Crime book cover.jpg = Book cover, fair use claimed
 * File:Canale di Cannaregio - Viewed from Grand Canal.jpg = Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 4.0 International license.
 * File:PI5DAE~2 - CopyPeggy Guggenheim Museum.JPG = Creative Commons Attribution 3.0 Unported license.
 * File:Christopher Bollen Librairie Mollat interview 2016.png = Creative Commons Attribution 3.0 Unported license.
 * File:Cruiseship passing bacino San Marco Venise.jpg = Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 3.0 Unported, 2.5 Generic, 2.0 Generic and 1.0 Generic license.
 * File:Highsmith on After Dark.JPG = Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 3.0 Unported license.


 * 1) Overall:
 * This is a well crafted article about a work of fiction, if a little overlinked.
 * Good work on the references and obtaining archived versions.
 * If we can sort the overlinking, then nothing else stands in the way of a GA assessment for this article. --Whiteguru (talk) 07:27, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

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