User:Whitneyaj/Post-traumatic stress disorder after World War II/AveryLong5 Peer Review

General info
Whitneyaj
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Whitneyaj/Post-traumatic_stress_disorder_after_World_War_II?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Post-traumatic stress disorder after World War II

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that this article has a lot of good information! I enjoyed reading each of the specific stories on World War II veterans. Continually, I liked how there was information provided about the treatments used during WWII. However, I think more research needs to be done to determine which course of current treatment worked best for the veterans. For example, was there a method that worked for multiple veterans? Are there success stories similar to the negative stories in the article? I think that the lead does a great job informing readers of what PTSD is and connects well to how veterans experienced certain traumas that led to their diagnosis. The information provided about shell shock, soldier's heart/railway spine, and battle fatigue paint a clear picture of traumas experienced by veterans and what led to the development of their PTSD. Overall, the article flows very well and keeps a neutral tone. There is a lot of information on PTSD and especially in veterans, and I am excited to see what you add!