User:Whitneyaj/Post-traumatic stress disorder after World War II/Callalily4 Peer Review

I saw that you had not written anything in your sandbox, and after reviewing the article, I have some ideas about what you could contribute! The article already has two subheadings touching on impacts, and I think it would be interesting to explore employment rates regarding soldiers suffering from PTSD. Another topic could be the public reception and acceptance of these soldiers and how that may have negatively impacted the stigma around PTSD. I think this topic has the opportunity to go down some really interesting roads!

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