User:Whitneyaj/Post-traumatic stress disorder after World War II/MorganH2024 Peer Review

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Whitneyaj
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Whitneyaj/Post-traumatic stress disorder after World War II
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Post-traumatic stress disorder after World War II

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There are not sandbox contributions for me to peer review for Whitneyaj. I will be reviewing and suggesting edits to the original article they are assigned to, Post-traumatic stress disorder after WWII. I like that the different phrases/terms related to soldiers mental health are stated early on, they could be relabeled into a history section. It seems like the Treatment section is a little sparse for the options available for those suffering from PTSD, I would find more i formation on this topic. The personal accounts add a nice touch, but it might add too much emotions into the article changing the neutral tone. Furthermore, more information on WWII in general and what tragic events created PTSD in soldiers might be beneficial to this article.

Thank you for your feed back. You made some really good suggestions. I really like both your suggestions about adding to the treatment section, and having more information about WWII in general. I have struggled some in getting the hang of all these Wikipedia assignments. It can be confusing at times. Having these suggestions helps me get an idea of what I want my work to look like. I will be using the suggestions you gave in regards to adding to the treatments opinions for PTSD. I will also look into adding on more information about WWII in general. Thank you for all the suggestions.