User:Whomtao/Bio-layer interferometry/NolanOriger Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Whomtao


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Whomtao/Bio-layer_interferometry?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bio-layer interferometry

Lead
The Lead has been properly updated to reflect the added detail as well as more clearly state what Bio-layer interferometry is. The revisions work in other related articles flawlessly while still staying simple enough to understand for someone unfamiliar with the method. The Lead concisely summarizes the information found later in the article while not being overly detailed.

Content
The added content goes above and beyond the level of detail and understanding previously demonstrated in the article and uses relatively recent articles as sources. All of the content necessary to have a base-level understanding of the topic is present and none of the content seems extraneous.

Tone and Balance
The content added is scientific in nature and thus remains neutral: purely stating facts and methods previously reported in literature. No opinion is given.

Sources and References
All new content properly cites accessible scientific literature from various journals and sources. The sources are from within the last ten years and demonstrate a broad range of authors.

Organization
The drafted changes are well written and fit into Wikipedia both structurally and in terms of writing style.

Images and Media
No media was added.

Overall impressions
The previous article has absolutely been improved by this contribution. It provides more depth of the topic as a whole as well as more details as to the methodology used in Bio-layer interferometry while also comparing similar methods.