User:Wi1dstar/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Siyah Qalam

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
It is one of the articles created by my classmates, therefore evaluating it may provide valuable feedback to them, and unlike the other completed articles which are rated S, it has a C rating, which I could help improve.

Evaluate the article
While most of the facts present in the article are true (excluding the lack of including the art under the Persian Art category, but that may have just been an error rooted in still learning Wikipedia's formatting), the tone, particularly in the first two sections, doesn't quite feel like that of a Wikipedia article. There is a good deal of the writers' personality visible through it, which is normally great, but in reading the article you can tell through the word patterns the author(s) use that they are a college student and use those words regularly in collegian essays. The images are well chosen, but not all of them have descriptions, and the ones that do vary wildly in quality of captions. Overall, the article is not bad by any means, and it has a lot of good content there, but could use a few more passes over and some standardization within itself.