User:Wiki-Shafr/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Parody_religion?action=edit

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
We chose this article because it is below a class C graded article which can benefit from our edits/changes. This article relates to DEI topics because it directly relates to religion. Better defining the intersection between religion and parody religion will only create greater understanding.

Evaluate the article
Lead Section:

The lead section has an appropriate intro paragraph but the introduction sentence could be edited to flow better when reading. Overall it is OK in terms of content. Does a decent job at summarizing the topic as well as giving some examples of parody religions.

Tone and Balance:

I believe our article should focus on the facts relating to the information and origins or varied parody religions. Certain sections in the article seem to assume certain aspects about certain parody religions. I think we can give this article more structure and strength by ensuring all the information is factual and to split speculative points into another paragraph.

Sources and References:

Within the parody religion page there are multiple links to other topics such as cults, sects, and religious movements. There is a section with a table listing many different parody religions/examples. There are certain sources but are questionable.

Organization and Writing Quality:

This article is generally well organized. There are some useful tables to help visualize different things. Nothing super special, could definitely benefit from adding more sections.

Images and Media:

There is a lack in quantity and quality of the images on this wiki page. One of the images seems to be totally unrelated to parody religion as a whole. think this page would benefit greatly from new images and visual aides.

Talk Page Discussion:

The Talk-Page includes different accounts of people appealing new parody religions to be added in the wiki page. Overall not thorough enough.

Overall Impressions:

Overall this article is a good start for an interesting topic. I think if this article was more flushed out it might spread awareness about parody religions as a whole. I think there are lots of opportunities to improve the information in the article. Increasing the amount of the examples given and factual information used would benefit this page.