User:WikiBeani0/Visual narrative/Jelotan Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Angie - WikiBeani0


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:WikiBeani0/Visual_narrative?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Visual narrative

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

So far this is really strong start I think you're heading in a more informed positions the current very bare bones article. The source you found is also very good. I wonder if " misinformative, or disinformative" is a bit redundent and if "misleading or misinformative" might be a bit more clear? Overall great work!