User:Wikibrim/Elizabeth R. Cole/Kensey Smith Peer Review

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(provide username) I am reviewing Wikibrim/ Elizabeth R. Cole


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 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wikibrim/Elizabeth_R._Cole?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
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I thought your Lead outlined what you are discussing throughout your article; however, I think an even more concise sentence could add even more value where you save the depth (such as the departments Cole is in and the research she does) for the content/body. Under the section of education and career, I think you should include a citation for the last sentence involving Cole being a consulting editor for American Psychologist. I like the inclusion of various sources that seemed to provide credibility/reliability to the information being stated and all of the links worked. You remained neutral throughout the article and stated the facts opposed to favoring one side over another. Under the awards and recognitions sections, I thought you did well in chronologically organizing the dates. To further enhance the quality of your article, I would suggest adding images with captions.