User:Wikibrim/Elizabeth R. Cole/RachelA22 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Wikibrim


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wikibrim/Elizabeth_R._Cole?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think it could be helpful to include more information in the "Notable Works" section if there is any available from your sources. You could also consider explaining more about what her journal articles are about. It could be helpful to add pictures if there are any available. I think your lead sentence is great and seems really concise and informative. I think that all of the information you included was relevant to the topic, and your article was great overall. It was really interesting to read!