User:Wikicuh2002/Desertification/444vibes Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Wikicuh2002


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Wikicuh2002/Desertification
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Desertification

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article draft explains the topic and provides useful information very well. From your draft, the fact that deserts have grown and shrunk impressed me. Your draft first section does a good job at describing the subject in a clear way. Changes I would suggest you to apply to the article would be more information regarding vegetation, managed grazing, and desert reclamation. These changes be an improvement because these sections of the articles lack information compared to the rest. The most important thing you could do to improve the article would be restoring balance throughout all sections of the article by providing evidence in lesser areas to fill in gaps so that it is well-balanced. Something I noticed about your draft article that could be applicable to my own article, sustainable food systems, is the fact that global food security is threatened by desertification and overpopulation.